Writing tip: Keep the story moving forward
On May 13, 2014 | 1 Comments | News & Events, Writing tips |

When I was writing my first novel, I was so excited to see my own words on the page that I ended up with several scenes that didn’t have much at all to do with the main plot. After I signed with an agent, she pointed out this tendency to wander and had me cut a lot. I mean, a LOT. It was painful to hit the delete key, but I realized she was right. (Click here to read my post on what to do with scenes you cut.)

Lesson learned: always keep the story moving forward. If you go off on tangents that have nothing to do with the plot or aren’t going to somehow tie back into it later, your readers are going to get confused or bored, and they may stop reading entirely.

Be careful not to veer too far off course!

I recently finished reading a murder mystery that veered off in several directions with new characters who seemed interesting enough, but then they all disappeared and never wound their way back into the story. When the killer was revealed and the book was over, instead of feeling satisfied, I found myself scratching my head and thinking, “But what happened to that little blonde girl on the side of the road? And why didn’t I find out what the deal was with that creepy truck driver guy? And where did that wise old lady from the restaurant go?

It felt almost as if the author didn’t finish writing the book. Having subplots can keep a novel interesting, but they need to keep the overall story moving forward. If they go nowhere, your story goes nowhere, and your readers might end up going somewhere else for their next book.


This blog post originally appeared on CreateSpace.com. Reprinted with permission. © 2014 CreateSpace, a DBA of On-Demand Publishing, LLC. All rights reserved.

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Denise Hisey Posted May 19, 2014 at10:40 am   Reply


As a reader I can totally relate to wondering what happened to some of the ‘lesser’ characters.
It’s something I’ve tried to keep in mind also when writing.
I’m going to read your post now about what to do with deleted scenes because it is painful to hit that delete button! 🙂

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